Feedback and Responses from our Treatment/Pitch

There were a few basic but important issues that arose when we got out feedback:

• Fisrt of all we had far too much going on in our opening sequence to fit into 2 minutes of cinematic style sequence.
• We also realised that we hadnt researched enough into our special effects to know if it would be possible to complete the special effects in the time we have for this project
• The setting would be too small to try and choreograph a safe and effective fight scene
• We also hadn't decided about music, we knew what sort of music we wanted but we hadn't researched actually what music we were gong to use.
• We also had not decided how we were going to do our titles
• Having a gunshot was just over the top, we wanted it to have another special effect but it is just not realistic in terms of our given circumstances.
• We were told it would be too hard to dress the set, but we think we will be able to do it with enough time
• probably our biggest issue was that we needed to make our plot for the rest of the film and it needed to be revised as we revised our opening sequence